Opinion talk:A theory against (certain aspects) of evolution and abiogenesis

I don't think you are familar with the editing policies here (trust me, they still get me some time).

1: Try taking it out of 1 person. Don't use "I" or what not.

2: Try using catagories and up section to make your page look better.

3: Even though this is mostly a thought process article, try using references.

4: Some of the words have pages them selves. For example abiogenesis. Put  around the word.

5: I'll write a critque of the article later.--Nlawrence 12:52, 26 September 2007 (EDT)


 * I have moved this to the Essay namespace, so the "I" criticism is less cogent, now. Categories and references are still good ideas, though. ~ MD "Webster" Otley (talk) 14:38, 20 October 2008 (UTC)